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Very nice writing as always. The title is a genious one :D (Good you have it here in Pitch Zone with the script attached, proven the concept is yours). There's some really nice lines "So many things can't be told right." - "Everything can be told." Particularly: "This is what makes us who we are today. ... This is the buildup of all these little things." That line is very strong in terms of the title. Text. Everything is building up to something... The human interactions with text interactions also cool. The events feel very real and are powerful for that reason. It's like she is having problems, yet in the end she is trying to help him and yet again in the end she... Very real stuff. I had little trouble tracking the fast pace and changing of days and there were some dream sequences? Some powerful themes there probably that will become clearer once I finally get to see the film :D Superb ***** (5 little stars)